Desert City

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Name: Desert City
Author: Maska322
Date: 28 April 2013
Size: 3 Mbs

This is my first(official) mappack








Download:
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?28cvgm7r7axfbw8

Looks interesting, I will download it.

EDIT: I have tested it, it's pretty nice overall.

The Pros :

1 - 4 levels in a single mappack is pretty nice.
2 - Fights and battles with enemies are good.
3 - The mappack is long enough.
4 - Last level is amazing, Grand Cathedral style, but shorter.
5 - Third level looks like Alley of the Sphinx, I like it.
6 - Weapons order is respected, that's good.

The Cons :

1 - There is no auto quicksave, that's bad. -1
2 - Too bad there is no NETRICSA message.-0.5
3 - I don't like the foor texture in the last level. -0.5
4 - Textures could use detail textures in the third layer. -0.5
5 - In the 2nd level, you spawn out of the map, the spawn is fucked up, I was forced to use fly mode to go into the map. -2 (this bug appears because the area of the spawn is smaller than the player start entity, make sure the whole player start entity can enter in the area without having a part in a wall)
6 - Doors texture could be better. -0.5
7 - Terrain in the first level is visible from the start, that doesn't look good.-1

Overall Score: 14/20 - Fair

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4 - Textures could use detail textures in the third layer.

Sorry, my serious editor is wrong, i don`t use detail:(

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6 - Doors texture could be better.

I don`t like making doors:(

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5 - In the 2nd level, you spawn out of the map, the spawn is fucking up, I was forced to use fly mode to go into the map.

I don`t know why.I place start in good place:/

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2 - Too bad there is no NETRICSA message.

I don`t know how to make NETRICSA message:(

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1 - There is no auto quicksave, that's bad.

Next time, i create

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"Sorry, my serious editor is wrong, i don`t use detail:("

I don't really see what you mean.

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"I don`t like making doors:("

That will be fine when you will be more exprienced. ^^

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"I don`t know why.I place start in good place:/"

That's a common bug.

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"I don`t know how to make NETRICSA message:("

I can maka a tutorial if you want.

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"Next time, i create"

Good

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Citation:
"I don`t know how to make NETRICSA message:("

I can maka a tutorial if you want.

Yea, i want:)

Ok, I'll do one when I will have more time.

I have tested the map too... with cheats, because my SS:FE was not working, I have copied SS:FE .GRO files into my SS:SE, map working, but enemies can't spawn and the game crashes if I take the golden cross.
SkiorDiablo forget one thing (I have tested the map with SK, with vocal chat) : The templates' shadows can be seen through houses and buildings.

But in fact, the mappack is good ^^

(I prescise my english sucks a little).

I couldn't know why my game was working perfectly now...
But I did a video glitch of your map...
I upload it in a moment, not now ^^

Fixed english stuff

I hope you can watch private video

BE CAREFUL ! SOUND IS HORRIBLE, QUALITY LOOKS LIKE A SHIT !
I'm placing "annotation" (Eng Or FR?^^) on video to show glitch

:/

I have noted in the description something about this vidéo, Your maps is not bad in reality, just there are some problems, find glitch may be useful to correct these on another maps you can make, your work is good !

Now in better quality!


http://www.mediafire.com/download/ntwc4ej89ab818d/Desert_City_HD.gro

Added to portal, contragulations on release